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Roxy journal doll

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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
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Hello c: For your first Journal Doll it looks very cute.The animation is very smooth and the eyes are very well too! But there are a few things I want to mention. At first, the ear and the wing are looking a little bit odd. I mean, the wing should be behind the ears... Moreover,the Tail. The animation is fluently, yes, but it looks as if it grows and shrink. So if I were you, would make it wagging or something like that. Just take a look in Deviantart, there are lots of helpful tutorials c: However, you did a cute job. Don't be dissapointed because of the critique, make more of them and practise, practise, practise <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt=";)" title=";) (Wink)"/>